Ku selak bingkisan dari syurga
amaran Nya pedih
janji Nya indah
diri ini kian penat dan tenat
dosa bersulam noda
memburung kusta hedonisme
manakah hujungnya.
Salah siapa?
Terfikir ku seketika.
Terhenti langkah di pintu syurga.
Termangu diri di lorong neraka.
Sesal terbungkam didada
syurga dan neraka
milik siapa?
Mentari subuh bersinar lagi
Desir iman bertiup
Wangian taqwa bertebaran
Ku siulkan bait-bait rindu
Ku kepilkan nota-nota syukur
Ke kebun langit itu.
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17 comments:
yaaay!! 1st...
i love ur words a lot...
nice playing badminton with u lah
tajul gedz!
haha :p
btw, beautiful written moja :)
Tajul,
Hahaha. Thanksss!
Nice 'defeating' you oso!
Hahahahahaha..
kiddin'
:P
*beautifully
Aimi,
Thanks.
Tajul mmg gediks. Hahaha
*Jangan nangis kalah. Hahahaha!
:)
cantek laaa
moja,aq cadangkan koko nanti ko amek literature appreciation(it's in bm actually)..
aq tgh amek tuh dis sem..next week kiteorg tgk cerite ayat2 cinta..haha
nanti aq pom bley la tulis sajak mcm ko..hahah
Liyana,
Eyh? Ade ke? Bley amek 2 x? aku nak try photography sbenarnya (camera xde lagi!)
Bdw, Thanks!!
best moja!
teruskan. aku xlayak ke syurga-Mu namun xpula aku berupaya ke neraka-Mu. janji Dia janji yang abadi.
sy baru pas kena marah ngan ayah sebab xpuasa sunat lagi. again,BAD ain!! :(
keep update ye!
i think i wanna stop writing. guess ptt b'henti.
Irma,
Thanks!Tapi... nape nak brenti?
Busy?
xbusy pun.
xtau. rasa yg i'm bad in writing,actually kan.
tapi sy still peminat kamu. :D
Irma,
Writing is not about you make ppl goes 'whoa' and 'fuiyoh'. It's about you and what you're writing about. As long, as you are sincere to yourself and your writings, InsyaAllah it will turn up to be good.
I write for myself and if its inspire others, that will be a bonus to me.But the most important point for EVERYONE to bear in mind is; "Tulis Dari Hati". Because your writings will be meaningless if you write, just for the sake to impress others or to go with the trend. Just be sincere to yourself and pour everything in what you're working on.
You're not that bad laa Irma. I've been blogging for a quite long time. And I have no visitors/ commentators at all. But its ok. Because I found my shrine in it. Don't give up or give in ok? If you really like writing, don't EVER give up on it. :) k?
:P
it's not like that way la.
sy xpenah kisah pun org fhm ke x,perasan ke x.
tpi there's a person yg suka men'judge' org but she kept saying that she won't ever do that in her blog.
and she make me annoyed. :)
sy suka menulis n ber'cakap' ngan diri sndri. so the best way blogging la kan.
plus,kinda pening.
byk interviews. mara,sime darby,shell.
p.s : still dlm perasaan bengang ngan org yang libatkan nama saya tu. inspire me cepat moja!!
ok,anda blh jadikan ini post baru. terima kasih. hahahaha. :p
Irma,
Hahaha. Good to hear that Irma. To hell with her. And gooooood luck with the interviews! Hahaha! Dapat, you have to treat me laa after that.
Post baru?
Hehehe. I have proposal to do and busy with my ethos book club tuh. Hehehe. Tengok lah, jika saya berupaya mencuri sedikit masa yang selalu menghambat.(padahal suka bazir masa. Isk3)
:P
hey!!
sape yg kalah dgn sape ni??
moja si "ditiup oleh angin"..
wakakakaka :-P
Aimi,
lalalalalalala...
gaya permainan aimi, "Tajol!" and " Tajoool" another " Tajoool" and more "Tajoooool"..
Harharhar. :P
nape aku rase aku macam mangsa kat sini?
Tajul,
Ak kutuk Aimi, yang slalu panggil name ko bile main.
xblay blah tol. :P
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