Kehadapan bintang jatuh
Tidak tahu mengapa
Tidak tahu bagaimana
Tidak tahu pada siapa
Ingin kuzahirkan rasa
Yang terbungkam dijiwa
Yang entah bila bisa dilunaskan
Menatap wajahmu
Sudah bisa membuat hatiku terpaku
Kau satu dicelahan berjuta
Kau permata dicelahan ribuan kaca
Ku tahu yang ku bisa menunggumu
Hingga ke hujung waktu,
Namun bisakah kau menyambut tangan ku
Hingga ke hari itu?
Namun,
Aku tahu peraturan-Nya.
Kerana
Demi sesungguhnya,
Aku ingin menjadi yang halal
Bagimu,
untuk menyentuhku
p/s: I know that this sounds like crap, but try to bear with it.
I can't properly think now.
(:
15 comments:
ehem...
its nicely writen
but i must say..
its lack of passion..
it doesnt seems like u really wanting her..
and i think the words that u used macam ko dah slalu gune...
yes!! itu dier komen budak kaunseling...
emomotamus,
Hahaha.
Tak boleh lebih2 sebab I'm not that kind of person. And I bet she's too.
so, I just wanted her to know that somebody is here, waiting. And I hope she'll do the sam thing too.
:P
p/s: Poyo btol. Kalau ade idea, ak buuat lain laa.
Moja,
It's not crappy.. but..
Tajul's right..
Even if you don't want to reveal much,
It still needs passion..
The words have to speak on your behalf..
The words have to make the her feel alive when she reads it..
Am I making any sense here?
I'm lost for words.. hehe :-P
Aimi,
Hahahaha.
ok2, i'll do some improvements later on.
piles of hwork to be done. geez bananas!
:P
"I can’t properly think now."
hehehe. cumel.
good luck! ;)
Azie,
Yeah.
I just hoping that it won't drive me insane.
:P
Good Luck?
I need that, a lot!
:P
aa i cant stand ur choice of words. sgt best! relax moja relax. :))
Nash,
Ye ke?
Hahahaahaha!
Tgah try laa nih Nash.
:P
"Aku ingin menjadi yang halal
Bagimu,
untuk menyentuhku"
ooohh...aq yg berhenti jap dr mem'bake' cookies(org order utk raye yo!) terkedu membace nih...
ape ni sentuh2??ish2222
Liyana,
Hahahaha..
Ingin menjadi yg 'halal', maknanya, nikah!!
Faham?
hahaha
anta laa sket cookiess!!!
Naaak!
:P
tau la halal tuh aper..ngoks!!!!
aq saje jer..cehhh
eh,nk cookies??kene order kays??muahahaa
gud lak moja...
i noe u need it alot...hahaha
Liyana,
Alaaa..
dah tanye smalam
ko kate xbleyh.
demn yuh!
:)
Faidz,
Yess bro!
Hahahaha!
p/s: moja? ko pggil ak moja?
:P
alamaks..aq bru jer wat utk chip..hahahaha
sian plak kat die..
kat ko after raye bley???kui2
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