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Kehadapan bintang jatuh
Tidak tahu mengapa
Tidak tahu bagaimana
Tidak tahu pada siapa
Ingin kuzahirkan rasa
Yang terbungkam dijiwa
Yang entah bila bisa dilunaskan
Menatap wajahmu
Sudah bisa membuat hatiku terpaku
Kau satu dicelahan berjuta
Kau permata dicelahan ribuan kaca
Ku tahu yang ku bisa menunggumu
Hingga ke hujung waktu,
Namun bisakah kau menyambut tangan ku
Hingga ke hari itu?

Namun,
Aku tahu peraturan-Nya.
Kerana
Demi sesungguhnya,
Aku ingin menjadi yang halal
Bagimu,
untuk menyentuhku

 


 



p/s: I know that this sounds like crap, but try to bear with it.
I can't properly think now.
(:

 


 


 


 




15 comments:

emomotamus said...

ehem...

its nicely writen

but i must say..

its lack of passion..

it doesnt seems like u really wanting her..

and i think the words that u used macam ko dah slalu gune...

yes!! itu dier komen budak kaunseling...

moja said...

emomotamus,

Hahaha.
Tak boleh lebih2 sebab I'm not that kind of person. And I bet she's too.

so, I just wanted her to know that somebody is here, waiting. And I hope she'll do the sam thing too.

:P

p/s: Poyo btol. Kalau ade idea, ak buuat lain laa.

nur aimi said...

Moja,

It's not crappy.. but..

Tajul's right..

Even if you don't want to reveal much,

It still needs passion..

The words have to speak on your behalf..

The words have to make the her feel alive when she reads it..

Am I making any sense here?

I'm lost for words.. hehe :-P

moja said...

Aimi,

Hahahaha.
ok2, i'll do some improvements later on.
piles of hwork to be done. geez bananas!

:P

Azie said...

"I can’t properly think now."

hehehe. cumel.

good luck! ;)

moja said...

Azie,

Yeah.
I just hoping that it won't drive me insane.
:P

Good Luck?
I need that, a lot!
:P

nashrah said...

aa i cant stand ur choice of words. sgt best! relax moja relax. :))

moja said...

Nash,

Ye ke?
Hahahaahaha!

Tgah try laa nih Nash.
:P

Liyana said...

"Aku ingin menjadi yang halal
Bagimu,
untuk menyentuhku"

ooohh...aq yg berhenti jap dr mem'bake' cookies(org order utk raye yo!) terkedu membace nih...
ape ni sentuh2??ish2222

moja said...

Liyana,

Hahahaha..
Ingin menjadi yg 'halal', maknanya, nikah!!
Faham?

hahaha

anta laa sket cookiess!!!
Naaak!

:P

Liyana said...

tau la halal tuh aper..ngoks!!!!
aq saje jer..cehhh
eh,nk cookies??kene order kays??muahahaa

faidz said...

gud lak moja...
i noe u need it alot...hahaha

moja said...

Liyana,

Alaaa..
dah tanye smalam
ko kate xbleyh.
demn yuh!

:)

moja said...

Faidz,

Yess bro!
Hahahaha!

p/s: moja? ko pggil ak moja?

:P

Liyana said...

alamaks..aq bru jer wat utk chip..hahahaha
sian plak kat die..
kat ko after raye bley???kui2

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